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Monday 2 September 2013

The factory Persuasive Text

I agree that we should let the Fletcher's Family build a factory.

 If we let the Fletcher's Family build a factory they will give CCTV cameras. CCTV cameras are good because if someone will go to our classroom he or she might get our Chromebooks, steal our things that we needed to use for school.

 If we let the Fletcher's Family build a factory they will let us enter a Competition. Competition's are good because we can learn new skills and we can use our skills in the past.

 If we let the Fletcher's Family build a factory they will give us a new playground. A new playground is good because the new playground has a wooden castle, wobbly bridges. Which can help us being fit and health by running inside the wooden castle going pass the wobbly bridge playing tag inside our new playground.

 If we let the Fletcher's Family build our factory on our school we could thank them for what they have done for us. helping kids being happy in our new playground.

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