The way of the world
There were some kid’s sitting on a bench. Biddy cut a pumpkin stalk and she blew on the pumpkin stalk and the pumpkin stalk made a sound. Biddy’s band marched all around town but no one liked their music. The grown ups pinched the idea and the name of Biddy’s band. The grown ups have costumes. Biddy’s band went in front of the grown ups. And then the grown ups were angry. The county council liked the music of Biddy’s band than the grown ups. Then Biddy said we will show them the way of the world.
This picture shows that Biddy's band are marching across the town.
We are learning to put the important parts to a sentence. I know I can do this because I already done this with my group which is Kit-Kats.
2 comments:
Dear Bryce,
Thank you for sharing your story about Biddy's band. I loved reading about how determined Biddy was to show the adults the way of the world. I also particularly appreciated seeing the beautiful picture that accompanied your story,
From Jenny Oxley (Manaiakalani Education Trust)
Hi Bryce i like your reading work it is cool
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